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i confess





I confess
and now I have nothing
more to say,
the torture of my soul
is nearly complete,
I am finished
in the way a self-portrait
will always pool at bound feet
lonely footprints in the sand
are washed away
like sins in a confessional,
the remains of this day
lie dormant in the moon,
the barn owl has caught a blindfolded mouse,
the shepard knows the
wolf in sheep's clothing sleeps under
a blossoming plum tree
and love still walks in and out
of the doors to my soul,
takes me to every
ecstasy
higher and higher
tears of release fall like
rain inside my heart,
thin and greedy vultures circle
once again,
remnants of me
linger
like a poem.

 
— Kailashana, May 03, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Anna...

and in the remnants seedy walk, all life is expressed! Hi my friend... hope all is well enough to ya! Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 1 month ago

I gave up hope for lent ..

I gave up hope for lent .. all I got was this chocolate bunny, and I'm allergic to chocolate. Jus' kidding, moonman. Thank you for your kindness. Much love to moonman and those who love you (which would, of course, include me lol). ~A "The way you make love is the way God will be with you." Rumi
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meic

17 years 1 month ago

Confessions: sometimes more

Confessions: sometimes more for the benefit of the confessor than the listener/reader. Cathartic. Not this one though – here we feel echoes of our own transgressions, familiarities … and we thus move through this poignant poem from sympathy to empathy. Even the perfectly placed side-slip at the fault line in the poem gives us pause to re-read and re-assess before continuing … to an end as it should be – unfinished. Certainly the honesty and the sublime artistry will linger - “for the longest time” ... cue Billy Joel as background balladeer. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

WOW! Gorgeously powerful

WOW! Gorgeously powerful stuff, I'm left aching. So glad I took time to find and read you Anna, much love b xx