DESERVING

Dreamers all will gather
Ensuring love's legacy
Survives in what matters
Each other, reaching for
Righteousness, relying on our
Vigilance, vigilantes
In hope
Nothing gets taken for
Granted

— faerybeki, May 03, 2009

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

Craig Norris

17 years 1 month ago

Dreamers all will gather

and so we should, nice one Beki. Cheers Craig

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks Craig, indeed we

Thanks Craig, indeed we should :) sorry taken me few days to acknowledge your comment, no doubt you have posts I'll enjoy cathing up with, see you anon, much love b x

professor

17 years 1 month ago

Well you know me by now Beki, these always make me have a go as well. So here,as it were, is a slight adaptation lol. Liked what you wrote of course. BW Keith x Dreamers all will gather Ensuring love’s legacy Survives in what matters; Each other. Reaching for righteousness; Vigilant of veracity; Instilling hope that Nothing gets taken for Granted

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Keith, yes I know you a

Hi Keith, yes I know you a little by now and am not suprised you took my effort, streamlined it and gave it more power and punch, love what you wrote and glad you like what I did, lol :) Not sure if this is the place to say that your reading of 'Images of Love' was so exquisite I couldn't comment, (not even to say that), sorry will revisit :) thanks for stopping by Keith, always wonderful to see you, much love b x

Wafi

17 years 1 month ago

“Nothing gets taken for granted”

A beautiful acrostic Beki. Loved reading it. “Nothing gets taken for granted” You say so much in this one line Beki, seems quite philosophical to me(I read it in a different context). And I can see it, from this poem, how a simple conversiation about a birthday poem can inpire a beatiful piece like this. Sincerely, Wafi

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Wafi, thanks for the

Hi Wafi, thanks for the comment and the time you took to express it, you are always welcome here. I think the poem was intended to be quite philisophical, I wrote it after I made a vow to be more vigilant in love, tied in with a growning acceptance that I am 'deserving' of it, we all are. I'm so glad you liked it, much love b x

paparazii

17 years ago

Dreamers all will gather

A very short write meaning a lot, it's quite lovely and touchy Beki. Light and love

faerybeki

17 years ago

Thanks Pap, glad you liked

Thanks Pap, glad you liked it, I enjoy the challenge of using as few words as possible to convey deep meaning and I am partial to this acrostic form, fun to play with, always moved hon when you find loveliness in me and my work, thanks again, much love, always b x