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Blue_Halcyon
Blue_Halcyon
May 02, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rainy Days - An etheree poem

Rainy Days DownFalls coldDrops of rain,Silver splashesForming small riversFlowing to the dark edgeOf mystery, while fairiesDance between the drops to catch themIn tulip teacups for nectar tea,As the hillside glows with the lights of fae.
— Blue_Halcyon, May 02, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 1 month ago

Lovely vignette of an

Lovely vignette of an etheree(al) scene. Hug. ~A "The way you make love is the way God will be with you." Rumi
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

Rain drops of the finest kind

You have spun us a rhyme of the finest kind, with raindrops and fairies flying lightly, on your toes while you write with the silver water-brush of your words. I will come to tea with you and drink from the tulip cups in the rain. Not sure what fae means but I like it. Yours Ann of Norway
Blue_Halcyon

Blue_Halcyon

17 years 1 month ago

Fae

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, Ann. :-) Fae is a term that refers to the fairy realm. http://thefae.freeservers.com/
Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

ahhhh !!

This is deceptivly simple but beautiful in content ... I loved it ... Take care .. Love and Light JayC x x
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 1 month ago

Exellence within this

Exellence within this genera, this is something! 'Course you make it look easy,so I guess I'll have to try it! You sure do have it goin'. Great job, Gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 1 month ago

Lovely, great idea - well done.

Lovely, great idea - well done. ~ Anni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Occasionally in life there are those moments of unutterable fulfilment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be artic
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Yaaaaaaaaaaay Athena!!!!

Hey hey Misty, CONGRATS on spotlight! I loved this in chat, love it here! So happy to see you in spotlight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What can I say, simplicity and beauty. Yay Peace N Love Katie aka Artemis
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Wafi

17 years 1 month ago

Rainy Days

I like this too, didnt know about Etheree poem. A lovely write. It's rainy season here now a days, so I enjoyed this a lot. Sincerely, Wafi
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iverhyck

17 years 1 month ago

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Well, my new friend, I enjoyed reading your work: I've never read poems of this style, let alone I liked the contents. Konstantin.