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May 02, 2009
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The Raspberry Moon
I gently tied a rope around
the cactus I was holding hostage
uncertain of my next step I took out a pen
and wrote a ransom note to the Raspberry Moon:
dear Sir,
please deposit money, power or fame
into the blue mailbox at the end of the road
if you ever want to see your cactus again.
his reply came swiftly:
dear girl, we are all quite distraught.
we’ve given it a lot of thought,
and our concern, my precious flower,
deals not with money, fame or power.
your mission it is doomed to fail
for bleeding fingers tell a tale.
instead of those you did request,
we thought for all it would be best
to deposit in this box of blue
something of much more use to you.
we have sent you Cupid Seeds,
because, my child, your heart still bleeds.
— Proprietress of Crimson Hearts, May 02, 2009
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theladyblue
17 years 1 month ago
oh kata...
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
myladyblue,
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17 years 1 month ago
Kelsey,
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Kata...
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
Mr. Moonman,
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
Julie,
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Pure inspiration dear girl.
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
Anna,
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Love this :) gorgeously
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
thanks Faerybeki,
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Juicily succulent my Proprietress
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
my dear Ann of Norway,
Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
beautiful whimsical elegant
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
thanks, Mr. Norris!
Atticus
17 years 1 month ago
Wonderful!
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
Atticus,
yenti
17 years 1 month ago
Kata
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
thank you, Ian
Linda Moses
17 years 1 month ago
Kata
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
finally, Linda,
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
cacti
Rob Graber
17 years 1 month ago
Very Enjoyable!
Linda Moses
17 years 1 month ago
kata
Dylan T.
17 years ago
I love the images this stirs
Cloudthings
17 years ago
May the seeds sprout wondrous goodness in your gorgeous crimson
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Finally,