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May 01, 2009
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Hope of a new day
I appear to have lost my swing.
you know that thing,
that keep's my hope's alive,
so i can survive,
when days are really tough,
and you feel you've had enough,
when friends just can't be found,
and no one comes around,
why do days fly bye, and bye,
it really makes me cry,
and the pain within i see,
seems to last an eternity,
and i sigh with a heavy heart,
wishing that i could depart,
to a time when i was young,
and the days where oh' so long,
to the time it used to be,
that i lived so carefree,
and everything was well,
instead of this living hell,
and sleep seems far away,
as i long for yesterday,
and time is ticking by,
and no matter how i try,
i cannot undo what i have done,
and i long to see the sun,
rise on a new day,
full of hope to come my way.
— big-Alzer, May 01, 2009
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Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Hope
big-Alzer
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks Gee