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Besties! (Funnay!)

Your poem's stink

they smell like poo poo

there so bad you should live in a shoe!

Were such good friends its always raw truth

joking and playing we make our way through

while pranking,yelling and fighting too!

Were so alike we both love Twilight

hott guys are our fave and music's our thang

Danger calls to us and we act upon it

hoppin' fence's and climbing on roofs we come home with bruises

most likely to be grounded we text through our classes

you write bout me and i'll write bout you!

"I like my hair!Hey look at you!What'd you do sleep in a shoe!"

"Oh no you didn't!You take that back!Your so bad you look like a rat!"

we make our way through the day arguing away

after our popcorn fights we choke with the laughter

that wont end for a few days.

A serious joke is what this is,

not a sarcastic remark but not to be judged,

friends forever yep thats us,

inside jokes and fights,

hott boys and crazy loser girls,

this world has such a crazy twist,

how much we wanna hit em with fist,

they end up just getting some words in mist,

but that doesn't mean we don't bite and fight,

i can seriously punch and give people a fright,

thats what they get,

them short people haters,

gosh soon to be gang members,

Its not just Adri but Alex too!

i swear she hit me first,

look at her shoe,

she hit me with that too!

just cause i hit her back with that rubber bat,

doesn't mean i deserve that!

our lives so crazy,

but maybe just maybe,

the world will get better,

skaters will want me,

but nerds still want you,

you'll kill me for this!

but hey!the dark side awaits!

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Besties Since 08'

DORK!Love yah Alexa!

:P :D :] =P =D :) =) :]

— ANC1996, May 01, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

ANC...

it is obvious to me you have the need to write... this poem seems to need some punctuation edits, I like some of the lines, but... well, to be honest, it seemed very immature.. but I think it was just you having fun in writing... nothing at all wrong with that... do keep writing, and have fun doing it... hope I didn't offend you with the immature statement, I think you are young, with lot's of time... Richard
ANC1996

ANC1996

17 years ago

:D!

Naw you didnt offend, I know the poems immature; But its about me and one of my besties and were all crazzy so its bound to be.Lol Thanks for the comment and ill try to fix the erorrs! PEACE; ANC, :D<3:)
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AlexaGrace

17 years ago

Ugh

You said Alex on one of the lines not Alexa loser
ANC1996

ANC1996

17 years ago

:P

Oh you'll live!Its a typo! LOL!But it is funny!