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May 01, 2009
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A Bright Light She Came a Visiting; a Visiting One Morn
A Bright Light She Came a Visiting; a Visiting One Morn
A traitorous sunrise,
Dear Destruction,
Searing across the Universe
To visit extinction,
Like an unwelcome fracture.
A pause in time that consumes
Everything
And leaves a blanket of dust
Chilled;
Lifeless;
Devoid of hope.
Promising a Winter of Infinity
Of Nights
So inked
The stars have ceased to exist
And Spring
Forgotten,
Mislaid,
Abolished
Like the disintegration of the dawn.
You are missed,
But not with affection.
You are remembered,
But not with exhilaration.
You are feared
But not
With enough trepidation
Or planning
Or preparation.
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This is presented as an example of an entry to the May Contest:
http://www.neopoet.com/forum/21468
Neopoet.com is a wrokshop environment and it would be nice to see folks using these contests as a reason to experiment outside of their comfort zone.
A traitorous sunrise,
Dear Destruction,
Searing across the Universe
To visit extinction,
Like an unwelcome fracture.
A pause in time that consumes
Everything
And leaves a blanket of dust
Chilled;
Lifeless;
Devoid of hope.
Promising a Winter of Infinity
Of Nights
So inked
The stars have ceased to exist
And Spring
Forgotten,
Mislaid,
Abolished
Like the disintegration of the dawn.
You are missed,
But not with affection.
You are remembered,
But not with exhilaration.
You are feared
But not
With enough trepidation
Or planning
Or preparation.
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This is presented as an example of an entry to the May Contest:
http://www.neopoet.com/forum/21468
- Free form
- Open format
- Must reference only inanimate objects
- 750 characters or less INCLUDING THE TITLE OF THE POEM (that is CHARACTERS people not WORDS - character is one (1) word consisting of 10 characters)
- For purposes of the contest spaces are not counted as characters
Neopoet.com is a wrokshop environment and it would be nice to see folks using these contests as a reason to experiment outside of their comfort zone.
— Pugilist, May 01, 2009
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