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Apr 30, 2009
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The sweetness of this gallaxy - Undoing the pain
Deep within you somewhere
I make contact
star to star you touch me
and we burn
glowing into future unknown gallaxies
open handed loving gifts
we learn
And in the vastness of the history behind us
we awaken still more lessons dressed in tears
as your eyes climb more inside me I can find us
more connected than we might be, given years
The sky has wept before us
all these visions swept
implore us
angels gather hearts to store us
for the cold
.... but that's my heart you hold
So we go swirling through eternity, unknowing
you catch my hand like otters
floating in the stars
neither knowing, or much caring where we're going
sweetness drawing out our grieving, healing scars
I make contact
star to star you touch me
and we burn
glowing into future unknown gallaxies
open handed loving gifts
we learn
And in the vastness of the history behind us
we awaken still more lessons dressed in tears
as your eyes climb more inside me I can find us
more connected than we might be, given years
The sky has wept before us
all these visions swept
implore us
angels gather hearts to store us
for the cold
.... but that's my heart you hold
So we go swirling through eternity, unknowing
you catch my hand like otters
floating in the stars
neither knowing, or much caring where we're going
sweetness drawing out our grieving, healing scars
— Cloudthings, Apr 30, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
I make contact star to star
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
This is one of many penned in those few days of raw "being with"
Wafi
17 years 1 month ago
Neither Knowing, Or Much Caring Where We’re Going!
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
It was a deep well this came from, but I feel it is the "lotus"
Bryan McMurphy
17 years 1 month ago
Wonderful Image
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Thank Bryan - it is a nice feeling too eh? That sense I tried t
deelilah
17 years 1 month ago
Hello Anni
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
there's a few angles to most of what I write, undercurrents wher
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
This poem grows on me with
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks darling Beki girl, you are so sweet