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Off Center

If we can remove ourselves
from the center...
our understanding of Life
can begin...
plant a seed for tomorrow.
— themoonman, Apr 30, 2009

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

Now there

you have it in a nutshell! I do believe we get so much more out of life by helping others instead of placing or trying to place ourselves in the center and trying to make the world revolve around us. Much said and a valuable lesson in these 5 little lines. Nice Nice Richard. Always Sincere, Tonya
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Dead centered my friend

Plant a seed for tomorrow, nourish it and watch it grow. Well said Richard. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Yes...

that seed could be just an encouraging word, like you are doing now... thanks! Richard
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Richard

short, sweet, and very true. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "I wound her up, an' I shifted down, an' I offered this prayer to my Lord: Said, God, get me back home to Houston alive, an' I won't drive a truck anymore..." - Steve Earle
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Jess...

thank you for your most kind words! I've missed you lately, or have I just missed you...??? glad you are here now! Richard
I

isitme

17 years 1 month ago

I agree

Very nice wisdom in these few lines.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

isitme...

glad you could see the path... and thanks for commenting! Richard
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Richard, love the simplicity

Richard, love the simplicity of the poem and the complexity of ideas! :) your last 2 posts have me contemplating centres, the still centre within oneself, (so important) and also the stepping out of placing ourselves at the centre of the universe, thinking of others, extending love to all, being centred but not central, ooo moonman so much I can read in here (yet again!) much love b x
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Ya know...

when I posted this, I wondered if the "centers" would be noted, and here you are! Thanks so much for seeing into! and through! Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

D.D.

Perfect has never been a word for me but I do appreciate it... thanks Julie... Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Janice...

You are very much appreciated here... thank you my friend... Richard
W

Wafi

17 years 1 month ago

Wow!!!

Wow Richard, what a great and true message in this short piece. By restricting it to self only we make life very small, depriving ourselves from the real joys and happiness that this great blessing, life, can give us. "If we can remove ourselves from the center… our understanding of Life can begin!!!!" Just loved it. Sincerely, Wafi
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Wafi...

It is really a simple deduction... much harder to do than to say... thank you for understanding it... Richard
themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Shan...

Your opinion in thoughts has been highly valued by me and others here since reading your writes, and still is!! thank you sir... Richard
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years ago

Mr.Moonman.

what a beauty this littel piece is. few words, great wisdom. few manage to balance this. your Proprietress
themoonman

themoonman

17 years ago

Kata...

you have one beautiful glow around you!!! thanks... Richard
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

17 years ago

OFF CENTRE

Hi RIchard Tis I! What a potent little punch that was to end the day off for me! Positively positive! tHANKs Bonitaj