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POOR MAN’S PALAVER

POOR MAN’S PALAVER   We stick our fingers in the mud For our children and for the future Searching for diamonds and gold We bathe in mud to eke out a living Our finds sell big in big cities While we have little or nothing to show   Our frustrations turn into hatred Not for the ones who oppress us But amongst ourselves down the line As we struggle to outsmart the other Go away from here, this is my space A brother holds the neck of another   I brought out chair to sit and chat Over beer, pepper soup and wine Small income came in as succour Neighbours brought out their chairs Luring my customers away with lies They stifle my trade and run me down   We like the suffering of the other man It gives us a false sense of our success We like to inflict pains on other people We hoard fuel to cause a long queue And sell in black market with high price Give them stress and bring them to knees   The rich man smiles at a fellow well-to-do The poor man frowns at a fellow deprived The wealthy sends a season’s compliment The underprivileged says ‘what’s your own?’ While poverty brings hardship and suffering Poor man palaver takes root and odium multiply



 
— t. reflexion, Apr 30, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Damn T, that’s a brilliant

Damn T, that's a brilliant poem, those last two stanzas, for me, so powerful! so true, sadly. Well done :) much love b x Ps you taught me a new word, palaver, had to look it up, love learning and loved your poem, thank you x
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 1 month ago

As we speak...

there are long fuel queues in my country which have resulted in extortion, hard times and suffering. Just because some people disagree with certain policies of the Government. The big men and women constituting the cabal are not seen queuing up, it is only the middle class, down trodden and the wretched of the earth that bear the brunt. Thank you for the comment and for the lessons. Best wishes T.
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Hi T...

Seems we are very much the same no matter where we come from. Man and the competitive need to survive and thrive at the cost of whoever it may be. A lot to think about within this write sir. enjoyed the read and the lessons... What's your own? ... great line! says much! Richard
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Richard...

Yes, man is the same anywhere and where we have little or no control over our vices, we see the animal taking over commerce, government, politics and even religion. Poverty, it is said, is a disease. So, the man who is bereft of virtue, is poor. Thus, the trouble of a poor man could be many. Thanks for your comments and for stopping by to read. Best wishes. T.