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Apr 28, 2009
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Heart’s a thumping senses reeling
Never had this kind of feeling
Faces ‘round me all a blur
Simple words I start to slur
Ground’s a moving up and down
Room’s a spinning round and round
Legs just won’t support my weight
How did I get in such a state?
One single drink was all it took
To get this poor boy on the hook
With all that whiskey wine and beer
It’s no surprise I’m feeling queer
And if I get up off this floor
Ain’t never gonna drink no more
© John W Fenn 28-04-2009
— shazbat, Apr 28, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 1 month ago
LMAO!
shazbat
17 years 1 month ago
Well thank you Jess,
Lonnie
17 years 1 month ago
What a gem, John!
shazbat
17 years 1 month ago
Been there done that more
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
What fun, what fun
shazbat
17 years 1 month ago
So glad you liked it Ann,