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Apr 28, 2009
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Flow
It's happened before
but not for a while now
a perfect feeling
a perfect awareness
the instant of aliveness
the eternal now occurring
former circumstances
forgotten
redundant apprehensons
of the future
unheeded
the axe blade striking
precisely
at the targeted longitude
the inertial momentum
exactly
proportioned and delivered
the moment
crystalline
the shutterspeed
of percepton
calibrated and precise
a moment of flow
energies streaming
from nowhere and everywhere
and then
I feel the pull of gravity
and I remember my limitations
which I had forgotten
for a brief period
of time
but not for a while now
a perfect feeling
a perfect awareness
the instant of aliveness
the eternal now occurring
former circumstances
forgotten
redundant apprehensons
of the future
unheeded
the axe blade striking
precisely
at the targeted longitude
the inertial momentum
exactly
proportioned and delivered
the moment
crystalline
the shutterspeed
of percepton
calibrated and precise
a moment of flow
energies streaming
from nowhere and everywhere
and then
I feel the pull of gravity
and I remember my limitations
which I had forgotten
for a brief period
of time
— Edevold, Apr 28, 2009
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Critiques
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
pulling G's
Edevold
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Perfect awareness
Edevold
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks for the thoughtful comment
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Edevold I found this poem
Edevold
17 years 1 month ago
What it's about
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
The "flow state" is a well researched area, well done here!