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Take my hand
Take my hand and see the stars
far out there with planet Mars
before you snuff your candle out
in the great black void of night
Take my hand and see the flowers
that bloom along the path
perfume dazzling the mind
before its aftermath
Take my hand before too long
else its too late and we are gone
through all this wondrous world of ours
before spring shows us wizened flowers
Take my hand and say the prayers
of their God whoever's theirs
stir the earth and smell the sod
before you turn into a clod
Take my hand and lead me on
wisdom's shawl still thrown upon
those that lie deep in the tomb
the journey from birth in the womb
Take my hand and whisper dear
in my ever listening ear
say you love me if you will
before the cup of love does spill
Take my hand and venture in
where others think it still a sin
there to find your heavens bliss
close the door and die a kiss
Take my hand and sing the song
before you join the angels throng
correct me if I join in wrong
canons fine to you belong
Take my hand and make me wise
so new to me that Devil's eyes
parading God, but in disguise
dark deep shadow of such size
Take my hand and blow your horns
we all know life's full of thorns
ride upon them make them shake
leaving knowledge in your wake
Take my hand don't hesitate
with me nothing is at stake
all I say I mean and trust
before we find we're sudden dust
Take my hand and count the days
those so positive, not dismays
swing the pendulum out and back
to the white or to the black
Take my hand and hold it fast
I will hold it to the last
never waver with the thought
that our life has come to nought
Take my hand and warmly there
Lie beside me stroke my hair
soul and spirit flying out
to join the place they call devout
Take my hand and join the creed
of the weary in their need
safe away from power and greed
till born again another seed
Critiques
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
I sent this yesterday?
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
I know not where it went
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
swing the pendulum out and back...
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Canon
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
How sweet of you Janice