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Apr 27, 2009
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Tasting the Fire
His life is so fucked up.
Only his Grandmother understood him,
and she died...
like every relationship,
job and house he ever had.
Only the stage
makes it bearable.
The Army couldn't control it
three wives couldn't kill it
but the audience lets him consume it
Out there, within the music
he is one with the energy
bouncing from the walls
igniting irreversible explosions...
sizzling the stage...
and the crowd reacts
with chilling screams
for more...
More
Only his Grandmother understood him,
and she died...
like every relationship,
job and house he ever had.
Only the stage
makes it bearable.
The Army couldn't control it
three wives couldn't kill it
but the audience lets him consume it
Out there, within the music
he is one with the energy
bouncing from the walls
igniting irreversible explosions...
sizzling the stage...
and the crowd reacts
with chilling screams
for more...
More
— themoonman, Apr 27, 2009
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faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Richard, loved this! When I
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Beki...
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
The pleasure was mine moonman x
Lonnie
17 years 1 month ago
Way to go Moonman!
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks Lonnie...
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
holy .......................!!!!
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
O...
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Double D's...
Tonya
17 years 1 month ago
To be so misunderstoon!
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Tonya...
Tonya
17 years 1 month ago
oooooooooh,
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
did it work?!
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
where are my stars
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
Mr. Moonman,
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
My Proprietress...
jadewood
17 years ago
Being a guitarist myself
themoonman
17 years ago
Jade...
Cloudthings
17 years ago
you have done a great job with this, fabulous expression my frie
themoonman
17 years ago
Anni...
Electric Blue
17 years ago
Tasting the Fire
themoonman
17 years ago
Thank you Maggie...
Seren
17 years ago
Sorry
themoonman
17 years ago
JayC...
Bonitaj
17 years ago
TASTING THE FIRE
themoonman
17 years ago
Bonitaj...
bloke
16 years 1 month ago
Hey long time