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Apr 27, 2009
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Sunburns and Babies
Melting hot, searing sun
rose again to shine on the day
Hundreds gather on FDR's lawn
to stretch, socialize, and hurriedly get ready
Bottles of water distributed
Announcer says "go!"
We make our way up Route 9
curious and supportive drivers
honk, wave, and smile
Their hearts warmed by our cause:
the hope that one day all babies will be healthy
Wandering through historic Hyde Park
happy doggies sniff strangers
Embarrassed owners apologize profusely
Upcoming creek and waterfall
serves as their playground
as owners wish they could do that too
Sizzling sun burns everywhere
not covered by proudly worn
purple shirts
Six miles fly by
As friendships grow
and hope is born
Sitting upder shade trees
with our barbecued meat
heavenly ziti, and bright red skin
we reflect on the day
and concluded it as perfect.
rose again to shine on the day
Hundreds gather on FDR's lawn
to stretch, socialize, and hurriedly get ready
Bottles of water distributed
Announcer says "go!"
We make our way up Route 9
curious and supportive drivers
honk, wave, and smile
Their hearts warmed by our cause:
the hope that one day all babies will be healthy
Wandering through historic Hyde Park
happy doggies sniff strangers
Embarrassed owners apologize profusely
Upcoming creek and waterfall
serves as their playground
as owners wish they could do that too
Sizzling sun burns everywhere
not covered by proudly worn
purple shirts
Six miles fly by
As friendships grow
and hope is born
Sitting upder shade trees
with our barbecued meat
heavenly ziti, and bright red skin
we reflect on the day
and concluded it as perfect.
— infinite_dwarf, Apr 27, 2009
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Critiques
Lonnie
17 years 1 month ago
Fantastic, Jess!
poewriter58
17 years 1 month ago
Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks guys!