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faerybeki
faerybeki
Apr 27, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Follow the Rainbow

Hoping
that some day
someone
will notice
the sunshine

recognise
the beauty

acknowledge
the light

feel the love
see the life

hear the hopes
share the dreams

follow the rainbow

discover me

— faerybeki, Apr 27, 2009

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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

ahhhhhhhhhhh

yes Faery you are special it shines here Your writing sensitive tender the colours tantalizing and peaceful against the dark rainclouds
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

wowwwweeeee! :)

what a comment, so beautiful, I'm blown away with gratitude O to read this from you, I so love your own writing, such unique vividity (not sure that's a real word but know you'll know what I mean!) I don't know what to say apart from Thank You :) hoping that's enough. much love b xx
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Beki...

and what a treasure they'll find... enjoyed your rainbow ride... Richard
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks Richard, reading

Thanks Richard, reading yours and other's poetry here keeps me thinking there are men worth hoping for :) So glad you enjoyed the poem and am humbled by your comment :) much love b x
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meic

17 years 2 months ago

In Welsh, rainbow is Pont y

In Welsh, rainbow is Pont y Glaw [bridge of rain] and is thus associated with the transition from light, through shadow, and back into light again. The journey itself is thought to be a magical voyage of discovery [thus the rainbow]... so the wish in your final line is sure to come to fruition. Who could resist the adventure with such a prize at rainbow's end? Your poem is wonderfully compact and beautifully articulated Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

Bridge of rain…Gosh

Bridge of rain...Gosh that's beautiful Mike, always intended to learn Welsh while at Uni in Aberystwyth but what with men, drink and the occaisional bit of studying I never got around to it :) Thankyou for your wonderful review of my poem and please see my comment to Richard :) much love b xx Ps have you posted anything new? will go see now and add you as buddy too, makes it easier to keep up with any posts you do make! Thanks again x

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