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Apr 26, 2009
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Beggar
I almost loved you enough
to make you real
but then I went back to sleep
and sometimes it rains
in January,
then the streets turn to ice,
and there is this beggar in my heart
embracing me,
breathing me into oblivion.
Come closer now,
see how
sensual the rose of desire
unfolding,
see how translucent my skin.
— Kailashana, Apr 26, 2009
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Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Unfortunately sans computer
Majeedahs_Umi
17 years 1 month ago
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Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks Brandi, much love and
meic
17 years 1 month ago
The second stanza sets
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
I was hoping you’d say
Bosscombat
17 years 1 month ago
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