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Rett
Rett
Apr 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

About Nora Jean *adult content*

About Nora Jean

I remember the scenes
All the little things
about Nora Jean.

I shivered with delight
at my very first sight
of her in the night.

Her warm breast in hand
turned a boy to a man
that was the plan.

I felt so complete
and worshipped repleat
to her body so sweet.

She held all the things
in a young boys dreams
that was Nora Jean.

As we grew older
I watched the fire smolder
each day she grew colder.

Then came the day
plans took her away
and she went astray.

I had all my dreams
and she had her schemes
that was Nora Jean.
— Rett, Apr 26, 2009

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Lonnie

17 years 1 month ago

Tremendous, Rett!

A superb rendition of 'First Love'! They do say it's always the one you remember the longest! Kudos, my friend!
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you Lonnie

I've never forgotten her. I just thought I'd try something a little different. I have been working so hard on "The Taxi Driver and the Lady" and needed to clear my mind. I tend to get bored with certian styles at times so tend to just see what I can make that might be a bit different. Glad you liked it my friend. Thanks! Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks Janice

All things go the way they should. There will always be sweet memories attatched, but I found the right one in the end. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Ah Kelsy

Nora Jean was the first big love of my life. I will always remember her. She ended up marrying my first cousin who ended up hanging himself in the Alvin, Texas Jail one night. I got the better deal when I married Vanessa. All things work out in the end. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 1 month ago

one of the lovliest love

one of the lovliest love songs i have read. salute to your poetic tongue. shan
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Wafi

17 years 1 month ago

Great Poem Rett.

Great poem Rett. It touched my heart. Reminded me of my love. Your story is resembling mine to some extent.She loved me a lot, but due to some reasons we couldnt unite.She married an year ago. It’s so very true that one never forgets his first love. Her memories never leave me. I had written the poem “It is not the end” for her, thinking by seperating our love will live for ever. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece with us. Love, Wafi
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sedona snow

16 years 12 months ago

A Very Moving Poem

A Very Moving Poem !......Beautifuly Expressed.........Sedona