Wafi

Apr 28, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

It Is Not The End.

It is not the end, my love
It is just the start.
For to become one, my love
True lovers depart.

This, you should understand, my love
Be happy and grieve not.
For anything is gained, my love
If sincerely sought.

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faerybeki

17 years ago

Gorgeous, beautifully

Gorgeous, beautifully simple, effortless rhyme. If you love someone let them go right? I did that once and he came back, only I was so petrified I couldn't let him back in, now he's lost to me forever but I'm always happy to be reminded of him, so thanks :) Great job Wafi, much love b x

Wafi

17 years ago

Thank You So Much Beki.

Thank you so much Beki, for taking the time to read and comment. So glad you liked it. I really appreciate your beautiful thoughts so much. Happy it reminded you of him. Your comments are a source of encouragment for me, my friend :) Love, Wafi

Rett

17 years ago

Wafi, well done!

This is beautiful. short and sweet and well written as are all your poetry. Well done sir. Haven't managed to touch base with you for a bit. I hope all is well with you and the family. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905

Wafi

17 years ago

Thank You So Much Rett.

Thank you so much Rett, my dear friend, for taking the time to read and comment. So glad you like my poems. Thanks for your sweet comments on my work. Always appreciate your thoughts. Love, Wafi

Wafi

17 years ago

Thank You So Much Janice.

Thank you so much Janice, for reading and commenting. My pleasure you liked it. Thanks for your generous appreiciation of my poems. Always appreciate your sweet comments. Love, Wafi

R.M.Shanmugam

17 years ago

how truly and simply you

how truly and simply you elucidate the love's core! shan

Wafi

17 years ago

Thanks A Lot Shan.

Thanks a lot Shan, for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate your wise thoughts so much. My pleasure it could get your attention. Sincerely, Wafi

Samaira

17 years ago

Simply wonderful

I admire the way you have put such profound thought into words. I really liked it. Wishing you lots of good writing in future, so that we read more of such wonderful work. Cheers Samaira.

Wafi

17 years ago

Thank A Lot Samaira

Thanks a lot Samaira for taking the time to read and make such a positive comment. I appreciate your thoughts so much. And yeah welcome to neopoet. Hope you will enjoy the company of the poets here, as I do :) Looking forward to reading your work. Hope your stay will be a longer one. Sincerely, Wafi

Seren

17 years ago

Wafi

Hey just wanted to let you know I loved this :) .... Short and simple but with very few words you sent a big message well done ... Love and Light JayC

Wafi

17 years ago

JayC

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. So glad you liked it. Your sweet comment is greately appreciated :) Sincerely, Wafi

themoonman

17 years ago

Wafi...

I too felt the warmness within this write... the repetitive lines even work, probably because it is so short, but it flows really well... one suggestion... for anything is gained... although the beauty of the thought is there... it doesn't seem to be correct grammar... not that it is always important in poetry, in fact, sometimes the total misuse of grammar is poetic in itself... but I was thinking, for anything obtained... or, for anything gained... only suggestions, I already love it, just giving my own thoughts... Richard

Wafi

17 years ago

Richard

Thanks a lot Richard, for reading and commenting. And specially for the suggestion. I wasnt much satisfied with this stanza. didnt know it is grammatically incorrect. Thanks for letting me know. I am thinking to write "Anything can be gained, my love". What do you say? Your thoughts and suggestions are greately appreciated my dear dear friend. Sincerely, Wafi

onemorning85

16 years 6 months ago

I like “is gained” :)

I like "is gained" :)

Wafi

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks

Thanks. Glad you like it. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

adjei agyei-baah

16 years 6 months ago

Sinnbadd

Simplistic but loaded with deep thought. It takes courage for a poet to pour out his heart like this.

Wafi

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks A Lot

Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and make such a great comment :) Glad you liked it. Looking forward to reading your work. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

onemorning85

16 years 6 months ago

This is an overall good

This is an overall good piece, but the last two lines are amazing.

Wafi

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks A Lot

Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate your thoughts... Looking forward to reading your work. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

jabuu

16 years 6 months ago

great

it is short but contains words that move emotions. i love the work.

Wafi

16 years 6 months ago

Thank You So Much

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. So glad you liked it. Appreciate your thoughts. Looking forward to reading your work. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~