Confused

esp., "more intertwined then a nest" - great image! Strong beat. I never thought of the internet as dirty and gritty but I guess it depends on what you're doing with it! One thing: "then" --> "than"

nice style. we need some more modern themes around here. I agree with Arrow on the nest-line, well written! your Proprietress

I agree, is crazy! Look how far creating more from less has came. There was a time we were all awed with 4 megabytes of memory! … lol, now, well, you know about now. It is also a bit scary how intertwined the nest has become. I often wonder what will happen should the bough break and nest fall. You certainly have given us a lot to think about in just A few words. This is great! Dirty, gritty.. I think of the child stalkers out there and the obvious others. I Enjoyed this. I do agree with the other two comments, I think is just a little typo, then to than. Always, Tonya