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The Man's Hands

The Man’s Hands

His hands are old, bony, calloused pads and knuckles. Pads from hard work, knuckles from martial arts. Liver spotted. He holds a knife and a small block of wood.
A piece of another planet landed on the coast north of Sydney, the locals call it Bongon Heads. Its blow-holed and uncannily crafted sculptured forms make us feel right at home, these two aliens in our own land, sometimes aliens in our own heads.
I watch him start to whittle at the wood, seemingly paying little attention to what he is doing, while we discuss the fantasy novel he is writing. To his irritation I lose track of the conversation, concerning locations and setting, fascinated to see a propeller emerging from the block of wood. He sands it smooth with a piece of rock and attaches it to the model plane sitting next to him.
“Will this work?” I ask.
He looks around gravely.
“Nah, elves prefer forests.”
Oh, be the way, when we tried it out later that plane flew perfectly. He had carved by eye to tolerances under a millimetre.
I loved him dearly despite our friendship being fraught with misunderstandings and the lurking violence of his nature. We met at a pub, playing pool, he started to reminisce about the sixties, which I missed, being too young. He said we needed to start a movement, a return to the times of peace, love and happiness. Feeling no pain myself, I agreed enthusiastically.
“Right” he said. “You run the movement, I’ll be the guru”
“Fuck off” said I. “You’re not my guru.”
Bang! A fist landed on my jaw and I landed on my bum. Somewhat startled and not in a lot of pain I laughed and he did too. Only later did I realise it was an affectionate tap. If he had king hit me my jaw would have shattered.
We became friends. I met his son, who shared a passion for Dungeons and Dragons. I went to their house and met an elf who, when she came of age, became my lover. To his wife I was “Number Two Son”. They were my “Shameless” other life. The Murphy’s knew how to party.

— weirdelf, Apr 23, 2009

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

epic novelette

so glad to see writing here again this one is wonderful Weirdelf reminds me of my times with the peoples I will come back and read this again having just gone over it quickly but its flawless so far
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Well, a bit disjointed, but

for a short short story this is damn fine! I used to watch the old men sit a carve/whittle on the benches outside the courthouse in Mississippi. amazing what they could do. When you asked them how they did it, they would just say. I remove everything that doesn't look like a duck, deer, plane .. whatever they were carving. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 1 month ago

LOL, reminds me of the classic story of the child

watching a sculpture start from a block of stone and watch day after day until the sculpture of the horse was finished then she raised her courage and asked "How did you know it was in there?" cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years ago

thanks Kelsey

this is one I may come back to. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.