Neopoet

Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

MI
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
Apr 23, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Sometimes

Translucent or see through

Or sparkling mirror’s view

 

I am not always I

Sometimes I become you

 

— Mohammad Yamin Iraqi, Apr 23, 2009
More from this author

Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Mohammed

This says much... the man in the mirror... we all are perceived how we are, but in looking at ourselves only we can see the depth or lack of even at times. a thinking poem! Richard
MI

Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 2 months ago

Themoonman

Richard!Thanks for reading my Qutrain Sometimes. You have analysed the poem very well. The circumference of our perception does not go beyond self. How wromg this can be! I appreciate your deep thoughts. -Mohammad
R

rahbar

17 years 1 month ago

SHORT AND WISE

Hello Yamin...a most powerfull thought in four lines of poetry...enchanting and thought provoking. Rahbar.
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 1 month ago

Mohammad

Very much said in a few short wise lines. 5 stars for 5 lines
MI

Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 1 month ago

Rahbar

Thanks for reading and commenting beautifully on my poem. I have not been writing much lately as I was visiting Karachi, a city plagued by all sorts of problems. I returned to Lisbon on June 1, 2009. You may expect to see more of my poems in days to come. Regards. -Mohammad
MI

Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 1 month ago

Linda

Thanks for your appreciation of my Quatrain. As always you are liberal with your praise. I am grateful. You may expect to see more of my poems and comments at Neopoet. Please keep reading. Regards. -Mohammad

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.

Join free Log in