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maybe ...


maybe, maybe not

a light traffic
moves
wetly at distance,
its tires slapping
macadam,

but without overt
animosity.

a bit chilly
this Sunday morning.

fog shrouds
the golf course
across the creek.

the ground wet,
clouds maneuver
aloft; no sun.

a colony
of tiny wild
violets
displays green leaf
and shy, half-closed
flower
at backyard
fringe.

a hawk calls
shrilly;

two cheery black-cap
chickadees flit
about and keep pace
with me as I walk
the extended yard

with my one hand
cotton-gloved,
the other held
nude prisoner
in a front jeans
tight pocket.

the season yet young,
early-morning
golfers can't shoot straight;

and

although I don't golf,
I stoop to pick up,
here and there,
a summed total of
three glinting balls---

Titleists all---

to add to
my forever-
growing hoard.

I'm not looking
for them,
you understand;
they aim
their glints at me
from their incessant
lies.

on my laggard
return, a soft
chick-a-dee-dee-dee!
follows me
through the door
and into the house.

a hollow thought:

I wonder,
today will I check
my blood pressure?

maybe,
maybe not.

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O

orgami

17 years ago

what a great poem

the ordinary but written with such reverance i cant say anymore I have no words other then just that this is such a great peice I am moved incredible
M

meic

17 years ago

Beautifully done: your spare

Beautifully done: your spare style transforms the commonplace into something iconic. I'd say you were the champion of the plain and simple - though your poems are certainly not either of these. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
B

barbsdad2003

17 years ago

Thank you, both

I do favor spareness. A long time ago I discovered the magic of few words saying much. Chuck
deelilah

deelilah

17 years ago

Chuck

I agree with Oragami, the ordinary written with reverence, and with Meic, iconic. This was one of your works that I loved to read over and over: a bit sad, a bit bitter, a bit introspective, and absolutely beautiful. I think it pulled every emotion there is out of me, including joy, but a very sad kind of joy, can't quite explain it. Yours, Deelilah