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Guide meridian

Guide meridian, Randomly and dimly lit at times,my gravely path of pebble's.Few road signs to point the direction.a way station every not so fair 50 miles or so.Finding a gray cot, using my coat as my pillow. Where it takes me, I know not,but faith and grit have drug me this far,showing a traveler many tales.Weaving a tapestry of purpose,pointing  the way to prayed for salvation.Suggesting the rewards,while teasing with the unknown.Sculpting a background of experience.a mosaic of purpose.Testing each learned skill,choosing to turn away from easier more traveled intent. Not knowing where my Meridian might finish,yet grasping what it has brought me from,and guided me through.
 My Guide Meridian may not be the smoothest adventure,or offer the security of a well marked road.I may single my self out for greater strife,reaping my own prize. I have passed up greater opportunity,turning away from the better lighted alleyway's.This well worn trail has been laid by the best,and with dogged determination I pursue them.So even in not knowing where it ends,I can find meaning in the walk.Time to listen to my own thoughts,while considering others. Unknown and difficult it may be,it's not a destination I seek.but the means of getting there.The honest pursuit of a goal,punctuating the lesson.so I can reflect,and be proud of the Journey when I arrive.With the hopes others may choose to follow,reflecting in all of the little rewards.
  Julie D.D. 4/21/2009 
— DawningDaytripper, Apr 21, 2009

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 1 month ago

... a kind of secure heart in your write that evokes comfort.

Hi D. D. I've been meaning to read you for quite some time, glad I found this... It seems to me to relate to coming to terms with uncertainty, maybe even faith, but even so there is a really lovely down to earth centre to it, a kind of secure heart in your write that evokes comfort. Left me with a lovely feeling, thank you Cheers Anni ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "...We ask ourselves, who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, and fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? ... Your playing small doesn't serve the world..."
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

What did you think of my

What did you think of my title? I like the title, it fits well. How was my language use? Your language use was very good. You have improved a lot! What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing? The rhythm worked well as did the spacing and pattern. How does this theme appeal to you? I thought it spoke volumes deep down. How was the beginning/ending of the poem? I loved both the beginning and ending. Is the internal logic consistent? Perfectly consistent. Two extremely minor suggestions. Showing a traveler many tale’s. (tales) My Guide Meridian may not be the smoother adventure, (smoothest sounds better here.) All in all Julie, I thought it was wonderful. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

wow your writing is rich in warmth...

it sets my mind on this different level of thinking your words openeing a door of thoughts like my memory of driving the Dakota states the highway line stretching the miles quivering in the speedometer dial the summer heat and dusk sky full of lovely lonliness a great Poem Daytripper