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Apr 19, 2009
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come to me
1. come to me
just come to me, my Love,
unadorned,
let me adore you
as you are
let my fingers trace
the width of you,
my hollow space
the depth of you.
2. who am I?
who am i to dance with the wind
make waves on the seven seas?
shall i pluck the moon from the sky
or the ripples in the lake?
shall i smooth the passage
of dawn in your dark-eyed desire?
shall I awaken you from your slumber
with a kiss,
break the seventh seal
with passion and promises
shatter the mirror
as we walk over water,
turn our graves into bliss?
just come to me, my Love,
unadorned,
let me adore you
as you are
let my fingers trace
the width of you,
my hollow space
the depth of you.
2. who am I?
who am i to dance with the wind
make waves on the seven seas?
shall i pluck the moon from the sky
or the ripples in the lake?
shall i smooth the passage
of dawn in your dark-eyed desire?
shall I awaken you from your slumber
with a kiss,
break the seventh seal
with passion and promises
shatter the mirror
as we walk over water,
turn our graves into bliss?
— Kailashana, Apr 19, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Great poem of love
professor
17 years 1 month ago
How many are the ways
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Keith, there is only the
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Oooh the dawn of dark eyed desire, I'm afraid that one got me
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Oooh the dawn of dark eyed desire, I'm afraid that one got me
meic
17 years 1 month ago
Coward as I am [in some
bjp
17 years 1 month ago
Come to me...