Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Some thoughts from chat
These are a bunch of words that came from chat with friends tonight. Thank you all
A deistic god makes the world and leaves it be
a theistic god makes the world and interferes for all to see
a pantheist god is everything,
that's cool, all the good and all that's cruel
a scientist looks, thinks, and will eventually see.
There was a young man from the states
who was unlucky in mind altered states
he mistook fuzzy fruit
for spiritual loot
and his bowels suffered unpleasant fates
I care to make some serious points / there are many to be made / does he bless who annoints /
or is he just afraid?
more points for your consideration / is the soul enlarged by copious meditation
/ or is stress thereby discharged?
what is a mind for but to make up?
I make up with my own mind often, but it does not always accept the apology, teehee
[orgami] 4:12 pm: I remember Philosophy We are standing in the dark cave with our backs to the light just starting
to feel it To fathom the light
[weirdelf] the world is just shadows on the cave wall, say some, turn to the light or get a burnt bum
I call in the fire, get burnt, call in the snow and freeze, run to and fro, in colds torment and fires
glow. Running every where to play, wouldn't have it any other way
thanks for the chat, you know who you are,
love,
Jess
Critiques
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
Love your Poems Weirdelf
weirdelf
17 years 1 month ago
My life has made a new start after this rock bottom
Kailashana
17 years 1 month ago
Apropos I think… Dear
weirdelf
17 years ago
heya heya heya hey
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years ago
a profound thought well
Seren
17 years ago
Jess
weirdelf
17 years ago
Thanks Shan, DOA, Seren,