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A Call to my beloved friends

It is a narrow lane to walk and
dirty bitches are wandering there to bite
I am walking to cross it  as
a travellor to His gates
Serpants and scorpions are moving in that dark
I have been taught to walk with care
I f I cross that  lane
 My Paradise will be there  and
He will receive me with love
Can I cross ?
I t is my million dollor qusetion to my world
Few told me it is easy and
others are telling me it is only a task
H e is calling me and you to hold his hands
I got it 
Are you willing  to cross this hell
as pure innocents of His beloved


— SAKTHEEE2007, Apr 19, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 1 month ago

A call to my beloved friends

Steven, your english improves all the time. Your title is is a good one. The line "I got it." confuses me a little though. Do you mean,"I've got the idea?" Make this a little clearer and go back and check your spelling and I think your work will be much better. The logic and continuity in this poem is fine. Gee.