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Apr 19, 2009
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A Call to my beloved friends
It is a narrow lane to walk and
dirty bitches are wandering there to bite
I am walking to cross it as
a travellor to His gates
Serpants and scorpions are moving in that dark
I have been taught to walk with care
I f I cross that lane
My Paradise will be there and
He will receive me with love
Can I cross ?
I t is my million dollor qusetion to my world
Few told me it is easy and
others are telling me it is only a task
H e is calling me and you to hold his hands
I got it
Are you willing to cross this hell
as pure innocents of His beloved
dirty bitches are wandering there to bite
I am walking to cross it as
a travellor to His gates
Serpants and scorpions are moving in that dark
I have been taught to walk with care
I f I cross that lane
My Paradise will be there and
He will receive me with love
Can I cross ?
I t is my million dollor qusetion to my world
Few told me it is easy and
others are telling me it is only a task
H e is calling me and you to hold his hands
I got it
Are you willing to cross this hell
as pure innocents of His beloved
— SAKTHEEE2007, Apr 19, 2009
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Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
A call to my beloved friends