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Apr 18, 2009
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Not All Said Comes Out Right
Not All Said Comes Out Right
Words unintentionally offends somehow
The ones we try to love and cherish
When carefree words inadvertently
Become twisted beyond parted lips
A lie is easily believed
When the truth is not accepted
Those spreading slanderous beliefs
Bring pain to those not yielding
Appreciation for the views of others
Two victims with stubborn hearts
Lose a precious friendship
Unwilling to talk it out, when
Malevolent lips speak unkind words
That set ablaze two hearts in drought
Not all said comes out right
If it did we’d all be perfect
Giving friends a benefit of doubt
Not assigning negative thoughts
Behind every action, promote peace
Words unintentionally offends somehow
The ones we try to love and cherish
When carefree words inadvertently
Become twisted beyond parted lips
A lie is easily believed
When the truth is not accepted
Those spreading slanderous beliefs
Bring pain to those not yielding
Appreciation for the views of others
Two victims with stubborn hearts
Lose a precious friendship
Unwilling to talk it out, when
Malevolent lips speak unkind words
That set ablaze two hearts in drought
Not all said comes out right
If it did we’d all be perfect
Giving friends a benefit of doubt
Not assigning negative thoughts
Behind every action, promote peace
— Barbara Writes, Apr 18, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
As Voltaire said of Paris
Barbara Writes
17 years 1 month ago
Ann
Majeedahs_Umi
17 years 1 month ago
yes,
Barbara Writes
17 years 1 month ago
short and sweet