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The Unreliable Truth

The Unreliable Truth;
quicker then a mongoose,
who's about to get loose.
Lyrics more undeniable
to the roots
when in my super suit
Critis always surpassable
spit between the tooth
so vibrations I produce
Hectic masses think irrational
and reproduce
Government seperating citezens into clases
for economics boosts
Relevent man made disaisters
for deploment in Iraq with American troops

— mdehe, Apr 18, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Matt...

I do like the way you write, do you have spell-check set up. Firefox has an excellent one with a free download. I'm not saying I agree with everything said in the poem, but I like your conviction. Loved a couple of lines, but you really need to get the spelling corrected in a few places. Critis always surpassable... Crit is ... Richard