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The Man with No Tongue Pt. 2

On Release


The door swings open, the sound never whispered so sweetly.

Enslaved for too long,
His clothes tattered and vile,
His face, all leathery and covered in scars
He can't go back! He won't go back!
So brutal! so hostile!

Now free, he makes his way slowly to the waterfront.

The water laps up against the shore,
Folding around his two feet,
the man with no tongue stands fixed
Eyes closed, reveling in the elements,
So fresh, so sweet.

Mother earth entices and he embraces with full delight.

He leans down as far as his knees will take him,
toes buried, feeling every grain
with a single finger he writes in the sand:
"I've let you burn,
But I've made you feel whole again..."

He stayed there for a while, 'til the tide melted his thoughts away.
 
— Bosscombat, Apr 17, 2009

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Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

????

Boss, who has he let burn? himself? his ideas, convictions? Has freedom made him whole again? I really like the way he takes in his freedom, quietly, is befitting. soooo heavy and sad at the same time as being full of such relief. I do like the image of his writing in the sand. Is like, STILL, he has his voice and he is contemplating. Perhaps i just answered my own questions. He has simmered all this time, letting himself burn, yet he is still strong, still has his convictions. Nice follow-up to part 1. ~Tonya
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

hey tonya

I can't tell ya what I meant by that I wanna leave it open for interpretation heheheh thanks again for your feedback! Always a pleasure! Hope you also like part 3, comin soon Hehehe Thanks again Bosscombat
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

okaaaaaaaaaaay....

we will just go with my interpretation then. lol ..looking forward to #3. :)
Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Another awesome write Matty

Another awesome write Matty sorry i didnt get round to commenting earlier... you have me intruged now i want 3 as well ... sits in the corner and waits LOL Love and Light JayC x x x lublub