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Final Revelation

So easily deleted
From a temporary existance,
Yet still engraved
Upon the face of your heart.

With bitterness and gall
you have tried
To wash away my image,
But somehow, it still remains.

Just as your memory
Still burns within my mind,
Those words of forever
They never really die.

Becoming lost somewhere
In the chasm of seperation,
Falling between the cracks of time,
That we never seemed able to grasp.


Now your anger at my existance,

Enflames mine...



For the choice you made
I kept my heart caged,
While Love's wings were broken,
And his life slowly drained away.


How could I survive?
While living enclosed in sorrow!


You know my tender heart,
But couldn't understand the love
That seeps from it
When it has no where else to go.

I asked you to change your mind,
For the miserably weak creature that I am,
Had not been brought into full realization,
Of the wounded, bleeding collapse to come.

Where I would take one

last,

desperate,

grasp for your hand.

Only to find in disgust, you'd pull away.

Leaving me face down in my despair...

That's when I knew.



Forgiveness has it's boundaries
Within the human heart,


And there are just some wounds

that will never heal.



— Blue_Halcyon, Apr 16, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 1 month ago

revelation

there is nothing that could make her change her mind,she wouldn't even listen. i never understood how in her heart, she couldn't find,eyes to see teardrops glisten. my favorite line is..[leaving me face down in my despair] sounds familiar. i love how you put it all together,and bring it to a conclusion. good job! gee