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Timekeepers Cottage

In this cottage
within the walls
of this house
that isn't square
I made our home

It's name fits me
as I store memories
of you growing
of my own learning

Shared path
Shared home
Shared love
Shared lives

Precious time, we keep you
close to our hearts
locked in our minds
entombed in our souls
deep in our selves

As the day clocks in
the night clocks out
and time moves on
I mark it
I photograph it
I grasp it's straws
so it's etched on us

We're becoming the keepers of time
during this time
a time worth keeping
We reside here
we wonder here
we laugh and cry here
we are
the present
Timekeepers

 

— faerybeki, Apr 15, 2009

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

hehe! :)

Glad you enjoyed this one Kelsey, it is rather a cool name isn't it? The house has a wonderful energy too, I guess some things are meant to be, it's lovely to know we're where we're supposed to be! and we're having so much fun building our home here :) much love b xx
professor

professor

17 years 1 month ago

Really enjoyed this one Beki

and your home sounds great...and very old world, rural English lol. I thought perhaps the last verse didn't work quite as well with the long first line and the many repetitions of time. If i might be so bold perhaps something like the following: We are become the keepers of time a time worth keeping We reside here we wonder here we laugh and cry here we are the present, each minute and hour of Timekeeper days. BW Keith x
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Of course you may be so bold

Of course you may be so bold Keith, any feedback/suggestions always welcome! :) The repetition of time was intentional, but I can see how it may weaken the impact a little, will give it some thought. thank you for popping in, I loved your old pic but must say it's nice to see your face, smiley eyes! much love b x