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DRESSED TO THRILL

DRESSED TO THRILL

Come to me in lace, my sweet,
come tease my eyes and make me peek
between each entwined thread and peer
to see your treasures appear and disappear
in filigree strands play hide-and-seek.

Come to me in silk, my dear,
and I shall listen for that certain sound
the hiss and slither all around:
sweet susurration of descending silk
lies unneeded on the ground.

Come to me in satin, love,
which clings to every darling flow
and tempts my fingers slide and glide
over every crevice, every side
to trace each precious gem below.

Come to me in rags and tatters
I know so well what lies within.
Lace is lovely, silk divine
and satin, too, though I incline
to choose your pearly, peerless skin.

 

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meic

17 years ago

Just a little piece of

Just a little piece of naughtiness - the last post for a little while. I'm determined to make a overdue comments in the next few days. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
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Arduinna

17 years ago

well,well...

a little naughty, but done with a tasteful eloquence, dare i say...romantic?
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meic

17 years ago

Guilty … incurably so, I

Guilty ... incurably so, I fear. And diolch yn fawr [thanks very much - Welsh] Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
professor

professor

17 years ago

Maybe you should have called this gift wrapped

Mike lol. Another dose of your tongue in cheek heavy sensuality and i could almost hear the silk sliding down and revealing those Welsh valleys. I have to admit that for me the third and fourth lines of the first verse did not flow southwards quite as elegantly as the rest of your muse's clothing but maybe that's just me. BW Keith
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meic

17 years ago

Thanks … and I agree about

Thanks ... and I agree about the first verse: somewhat inelegant, heavy - more tweed than lace! Tweed flimsies! Now there's a thought to shrivel a man's enthusiasm. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years ago

Just come to me, my

Just come to me, my Love, unadorned, let me adore you as you are let my fingers trace the width of you, my hollow space the depth of you. Sorry, I got carried away....;-) ~Anna "The way you make love is the way God will be with you." Rumi
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meic

17 years ago

Sorry? Well, I’m not

Sorry? Well, I'm not ... ... just thankful that I could provide a stimulus for such a graceful response. Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
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meic

17 years ago

Thank you so much - it makes

Thank you so much - it makes it worth the wooing then! Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~