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Apr 15, 2009
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Awakened In The Night
old evening
restless with
a hint of night
on far horizon
I turn deep
in warmth of quilt
and find the sweet
warm scent of you upon me
somewhere in the center
of the long dark
after I had closed my eyes
and cresent moon
hung low and golden
westward through
our darkened window
open to the coolness
of new spring
you came upstairs
and filled our empty bed
Body warm skin soft
as moonflower petals
your breath my own
my arm draped over
the shape of world
that is you beside me
wide hip under hand
full breasts pressed
soft against my chest
dark hair earthen
on my cheek
honeysuckle hint
arms sliding up
enfolding comfort
to bring the rise
of my desire
but you are sleeping
and in your dreams
you smile
at matching heartbeats
and I feel that curve
of lips upon my throat
as depth of pleasure
at the melting center
of my heart
which god brought you
to fill my life?
I must live forever
I must
restless with
a hint of night
on far horizon
I turn deep
in warmth of quilt
and find the sweet
warm scent of you upon me
somewhere in the center
of the long dark
after I had closed my eyes
and cresent moon
hung low and golden
westward through
our darkened window
open to the coolness
of new spring
you came upstairs
and filled our empty bed
Body warm skin soft
as moonflower petals
your breath my own
my arm draped over
the shape of world
that is you beside me
wide hip under hand
full breasts pressed
soft against my chest
dark hair earthen
on my cheek
honeysuckle hint
arms sliding up
enfolding comfort
to bring the rise
of my desire
but you are sleeping
and in your dreams
you smile
at matching heartbeats
and I feel that curve
of lips upon my throat
as depth of pleasure
at the melting center
of my heart
which god brought you
to fill my life?
I must live forever
I must
— Race_9togo, Apr 15, 2009
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Race_9togo
17 years 1 month ago
Kelsey
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Finally !
nokros
17 years 1 month ago
so glad
meic
17 years 1 month ago
A nicely-written tender
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Hi Jim,