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The Existence of That Which You Cannot Touch

Elements,

they masquerade as matter

And the mind

parades like it knows fact.
 

My heartbeat,

the metronome of disaster

Makes up for

what the flesh tones lack.

 
As touch must

make up for lack of texture.

To taste feels

better when eyes close.

As gold does

somehow lose its luster.

As poets

are forgotten in the prose.

 

'Cause all fades-

like midday's sun above a cloud.

And concrete

Is a word just like abstract

this love will

be covered with a mourner's shroud.

as words recede

I'm lost in want of tact.

 

 


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Seren

Seren

17 years ago

I dove into the stream …

I dove into the stream ... Ive found some great work today ! but this one deserves a five Love and light JayC
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meic

17 years ago

I liked this a lot: it is

I liked this a lot: it is replete with instances of tender-sad wisdom, and is 'sufficient unto itself' Mike "not all matterings of mind equal one violet" ~ e e cummings ~
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bjp

17 years ago

Dear Sha,

Love this poem. It is one of those poems that is so clear, it lets the reader lazily bask in feelings rather than ponder over multivarious meanings. That ease slips a little in the last couple of lines. I think that a conscientious reader will figure it out, its just not as silky as the rest. The poem is very good. bjp