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The Venus Project

All monotheism religions originated from the Jews in the Middle East.
But none should have belief.
It is far proven there are far Galaxies,
much further beyond any living things capable understanding.
It's incredible, not synacle, and not hypocritical,
inhale endo,
ingest Doritos.
It feels good for any male animal to blow a load.
This is what I do.
Sit and write with in mind a natural view,
because I know neither I or you
are anything special,
but unconditional
and hardly functional.
The mind in humans creates behaviours such as hysterical.
And it really hurts me though,
people think they are intellectual.
They take too much of the world.
In the blink of an eye blown to oblivion,
no one surviving getting it like the Achient Egyptians.
The Steam Engine began with an open mind, a boiling pot of water and a superstition.
Sparked by scientific fascination,
not money within the Monetary Economic System.
Why do you feel the obligation to the instigation's
formed by the creators of mass manipulations?
Fear for no resources for yourself do to monetary competitions.
But there is a way everyone is provided for by the Planet.
Get it through your hard head thinker then granite.
The Government and bank reserve they done planned it.
Starts with one manipulation then run and expand it.
Not much longer can my body of man handle it.
The decrease in condition,
possible by the leaders of addition.
Slowly eradicate the competition,
to increase their slandered of livin.
We need to break down this system,
like the catalytic for your emissions.
This is a whole new belief I'm bringin.
Some might even call it a religion,
but what do they know they can't even make decisions.
The break down I'm flippin drastically starts with generous givin.
Using technological inspiration,
The Venus Project is for the new generation.
All people within all Nations for emancipation.
So here I bring the proclamation.
Garenteed the governemnt will wack me with litigation.


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— mdehe, Apr 14, 2009

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 1 month ago

Love to read intelligent poetry!

Totally agree there should be no religions, though not a complete atheist I believe science will eff the ineffable. Beware of that opening stanza, it could be mis-interpreted as anti-semitic. So far back in time there is no true history, only mythology. Islam traces its origins back to Abraham too, and Christianity is an offshoot. Monotheism is a very evil concept but don't blame any one form of it. Well written too, I like the juxtaposition of polysyllabism and colloquialism. A small suggestion, a few stanza breaks may make it a more accessible read. My thoughts? Once we break that bloody speed of light barrier we will be far less alone and all Earthbound religions and monetary systems will become obviously meaningless. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.
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mdehe

17 years 1 month ago

hhaa

very good man! if humans ever break that light barrier... I hope so though. Not tyring to be anti semitic. im just statin the fact that momotheism was brought forth from the jewish religion, and all other momotheism religions are just branches from it. Jesus was a jew and didnt like it so he changed some shit to make christianity and now theres thousndas of rbanches off that as well. Same with islam, mohammed talks of jesus many times and he was prety much like jesus just changing the religion. look at martin luther. he didnt like the shit that was going down, and ended up creating a whole new religion with more branches. all monotheism rleigion are branches from the jewish religion some 2500 years ago. most likeley because they didnt like the egyptians who were polythistic. im glad you thoguht my poetry was intelligent! sory this message isnt haha