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Thor Love
While lightening flashes
plunging to the earth
her skin alert
her green leaves reaching up
towards the hidden sun
she sighs
in sudden bursts
as winds blow trees about
the birds,
they cease to sing, in awe,
and hasten to their hiding place.
The thunder god,
Thor is his name,
of Nordic myth gave birth
to this great spectacle,
he wields his hammer,
beneath,
the earth begins to throb
in sporadic rythms
reverberating through the hills,
the venus mountain
heaves and rolls
in undulating sensual folds
the rods of fire descend
like golden trees
reversed
with roots in heaven
branches stretched to feed with fire
their hearts desires
The thunder
when the storm moves on
abates
and airbourn drops of water
roam the skies dark canopy,
the sounds and sighs among the trees
die down
and dripping silver-pearls
jump into air
to reach the ground
where waiting leaves and
secret flowers abound
where there they slide down grasses green
to oscillate in coves of shapes unseen
this honeyed moment
quietened
floating
dream-like
and profound
permits the rise of perfumes rich
that permeate the oxygen,
pungent and powerful,
delicate and ephemeral
and all at once
they are the poetry of great lovers
bringing all to just this place
so quiet,
a place we feel is full of grace and beauty
unsurpassed by knowledge,
here,
no,
there ,
where?
In this present calm
so grasped in gasps of strength
that no man can resist its length of ecstasy-
suspense.
Critiques
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Thor
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
looked at some scenery of country far
paparazii
17 years 1 month ago
The god Thor
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Papapapaparazi
paparazii
17 years 1 month ago
Ann