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Out of Sight

Sifting idly through the sediment
and detritus of days, 
dipping spoonbilled into thought,
his reason left him, madness too.

He cast away floating outside possibility,
beyond all hope and stability,
to submerge himself completely
within the sweetness and the entreaty,
of the subliminal.

He felt the marching past of sound,
saw passion pooling on the ground,
tasted colour as a rainbow on his lips.
Watched the future and the past
spin a symphony of glass,
while virtue danced round and round with sin.

He touched the aroma of deceit 
as it quivered in defeat,
before fragility and honesty and trust.
Felt the heaviness of lust try to readjust,
innocence floated by upon on a breeze.

Coloured vapours rose around
that enveloped him with sound,
seductive, he became one with a chord.
His soul began to hum,
with the song that had begun,
vibration played upon him like a string.

All he ever knew, ever felt that he could do,
ever longed for, or thought he could possess,
was plucked neatly from within,
and sent off in a spin,
for perserverance and harmony to caress.

Like a blue sky thermal day,
that needs no cloud to say,
it exists, you simply feel it with your wings.
He rose into the light, dissolving from all sight,
and the song that he had learnt began to sing.

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years ago

Hey Craig!

Nice little poem here, love the lines "Let's all drink/to the death of a clown". I don't know why but I do. Love the imagery too, "On wings of silvered darkness/He flew into the night", beautiful. Great write, short and simple. Peace n Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded! Those who haven't joined rewards yet please do at: www.neopoet.com/rewards
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Craig Norris

17 years ago

death of a clown

Hi Katie those words are the title of a song, a really great song by the Kinks, put out back when music wore cutoffs. I was working on this poem and had the first three lines sorted when the song came on. Seemed perfect and they slipped right in there. Cheers Craig
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Craig Norris

17 years ago

reason and madness

Hiya Beki, love your comment, I agree with you about the feel of sadness and regret and I like the idea of ones reason and madness leaving, leaving one where? Cheers lotsa luv Craig
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

where?

leaving one sane and reasonless perhaps? ;)
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years ago

You killed the clown off :)

Nice editing, but now very different poem ,for me anyway, that quietness has been replaced with something more punchy, it's got more meat on it now. still like it though :) much love b x
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Giuliana Isabella

17 years ago

Great poem, Craig...

You write with an effortless quality that conveys emotion wonderfully. I like the flow of your poem - it has a kind of pensive feel to it too, I think. A lovely read :) -Giuliana Isabella
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Craig Norris

17 years ago

It's a little flippant too

Thanks Guiliana for your comment and your praise. I suffer a little in the belief that structure, rhythme, rhyme and internal logic are things that matter in poetry, but mostly I like poetry that has a good flow to it when read out loud. Thanks again. Craig
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years ago

This one has morphed a few

This one has morphed a few times, well done. I feel it improves hugely every time. I would have been happy with the last, but this is even better Cheers ~ Anni ~~~ "Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving". ~Kahlil Gibran