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crypticbard
crypticbard
Apr 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Cheers (almost haiku)

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A stubbie glistens

in the last light of day

promises raised high.



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— crypticbard, Apr 14, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Ahhhh, a beer in the last of

Ahhhh, a beer in the last of the evening sun, well earned after a long day, sometimes the simple things give sooo much pleasure:) Really like your 'almost haiku', I've got a few I call 'Haikuesque'! great job, much love b x
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

17 years 1 month ago

well earned!

That's the best way to put it! Thanks for your kind words and undivided attention (if but momentary - perfectly haikuesque ). You are much appreciated.