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crypticbard
crypticbard
Apr 14, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Looking Up (almost haiku)

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Cane smoke traces

in the late arvo sky.

animal sketches





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— crypticbard, Apr 14, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows., I am because we are

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 3 months ago

wonderful sunsets

Animal slaughter.to makeit safe to cut the cane. Animal sketches? Still, a cane burn is a wondrous thing, good almost haiku cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

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