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The Leaf of Life

 

The leaf of Life

 

The leaf of life hung on the tree

then Autumn came to loosen me

I hesitated in the breeze

November shaking, swinging trees

 

Then with my face turned up to God

I started on my way

fluttering down towards the sod

from whence I came one day

 

but fate had chosen other ways

to use my flag of life

I plunged, was pierced upon a twig

and there was crucified

 

I hung through Winter's bitter cold

I hung through Summer too

was sent to live this passive life

a contrast to the 'son' and snow

 

At first so delicately coloured

I faded in my hue

then turned so lacy thin and brown

more beautiful to you

 

I taught them love and charity

I led their pains to joy

I tell you life's frivolity,

there is another way

 

so heed my words and watch my deeds

your life is not in vain

you live your life,

you pay your sins


and reach to heaven again.





 



— Nordic cloud, Apr 13, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Ink Dragon

17 years 1 month ago

Ann,

a really great poem you have written here. I have only one teensy point of criticism: l.7 may read better as "fluttering down towards the sod". Yours, ~Nina “Like plumbers and dentists, poets are fallible, and the possibility of genuine nonsense cannot be ruled out.” (Mark Haddon)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

How right you are

Dear Nina, thank you we become blind sometimes to such details that escape our perusal as they flow from our minds and then stay, not studied enough later. That is much, much better. Yes. Ann of Norway
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Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Lovely

Another beauty from Ann! A lovely journey through nature...I just love how you incorporate nature so much into your poems, its sooo stunning. Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight at 9 PM eastern (NY) for the official launching of the new Neopoet Rewards Program! We'll be answering any questions while introducing everyone to the program! Hope to see you there!
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 1 month ago

Leaf Of Life poem

Nicely done Ann Harvey of Norway wcw