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The Man with No Tongue. Pt. 1

Imprisonment


He refuses to abide with the world.
Hasn't slept with his eyes closed in years,
Nor in that time has he:
felt the piercing glow,
heard the unmistakable crackle,
or seen the dancing tongues of fire.
The man understandably,
has unreasonable fears
All which make him stronger,
make him... fly higher.

A man... who once spoke his mind.
He Spoke the raw truth, unfiltered, unrefined,
Didn't care who was listening,
He was Loud, proud and brutally literal.
Flaunting his knowledge and opinion,
now can't utter another syllable.

Scapegoat, the man was made an example
For those future minds
that let their mouths be led astray.
They held open his jaw, cut out his tongue
and hurled it carelessly into the ashtray.

For what seemed an eternity
Within 4 dirty walls was only a bucket,
There was no breeze... but he felt it
There was no thunder... although he heard it
He saw lightening, but couldn't see the sky
It forever rained, but it never touched his skin.
So many tears, but now he can't cry.




— Bosscombat, Apr 13, 2009

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Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Having had the privilege of

Having had the privilege of reading the next little bit of this poem its a definate five from me ... this shows how much your growing Matty this ones awesome Luvluv JayC x x x x
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

heheh

Gotta love those 5 star ratings they make me all fuzzy on the inside lol Thanks hun :) <3
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

The stuff of heroes and legends.

A martyr in the making. One of those individuals with a rare indelible spirit! I actually love this poem Boss. You Write of someone with the courage to stand up and say what he feels, what he believes and paying such a terrible sacrifice for it. But, still his convictions and spirit carry him on, refusing to be broken. I so wish there were more people with such courage. But as you write, fear of reprisal keeps them at bay. Sorry I can not give you critique on the mechanics, if it even needs any, but the content is very strong and powerful. Always Sincere, Tonya
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

hey tonya

Thanks a lot for your comment! Its quite flattering haha also im glad you liked it :) not sure what you meant by fear of reprisal. Ill have to check out your work soon! But thanks again Bosscombat
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 1 month ago

ah, fear of reprisal. Why

ah, fear of reprisal. Why most people stay quiet and don't get involved. Like the man in your poem, he was imprisoned, had his tongue cut out. If we stay quiet, no reprisal to worry of. We remain safe, in theory. But, actually, the bad things continue without change ..until someone stands up! :)
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

ahhhh

Indeed :) thanks for that Enjoy. Bosscombat
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Always the bold ones...

Another great write Boss! It's always the people who dare to dream, stand up and speak for what they believe that pay the price isn't it? (ie: John Lennon) Well written, bold and awesome! Great job! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight for launching of Rewards! In the chat room, there will be a Q&A session hosted by poewriter58 and myself, 9 PM eastern (NY), come show the love all!
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

hey katie

Thats totally true! Thanks again for the comment and the flattery you're too kind! Thanks again Bosscombat P.s thanks for the mmultiple comments on this one :p
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Always the bold ones...

Another great write Boss! It's always the people who dare to dream, stand up and speak for what they believe that pay the price isn't it? (ie: John Lennon) Well written, bold and awesome! Great job! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight for launching of Rewards! In the chat room, there will be a Q&A session hosted by poewriter58 and myself, 9 PM eastern (NY), come show the love all!
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Always the bold ones...

Another great write Boss! It's always the people who dare to dream, stand up and speak for what they believe that pay the price isn't it? (ie: John Lennon) Well written, bold and awesome! Great job! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight for launching of Rewards! In the chat room, there will be a Q&A session hosted by poewriter58 and myself, 9 PM eastern (NY), come show the love all!
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Always the bold ones...

Another great write Boss! It's always the people who dare to dream, stand up and speak for what they believe that pay the price isn't it? (ie: John Lennon) Well written, bold and awesome! Great job! Peace N Love Katie Go Live & Get Rewarded- don't forget to join us tonight for launching of Rewards! In the chat room, there will be a Q&A session hosted by poewriter58 and myself, 9 PM eastern (NY), come show the love all!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 1 month ago

Boss

For some reason, the last stanza really makes your heart drop to your toes. A well written piece, friend. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Just because you have one, doesn't mean you need to be one..." Doin' a March of Dimes walk 4/26 : http://www.marchforbabies.org/jnj7880
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Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

hey Jess

That's kinda the feeling I was going for...dropping hearts :p glad you liked it!! Thanks for the comment! Bosscombat