march of time

I like these 5-7-5 senryu very much! To me is fascinating to give physical substance to ideas, non-living objects, elements of nature. I'm not sure what the embodied picture of time is in my mind... but is still leaving footprints, maybe puddles, like water, with reflected memories swirling. Anyways, Great write. Love the idea. and Very well done! Always Sincere, Tonya

Like this form and I know its a little "cheeky" but, when I read these Japanese style Haiku pieces I always try and see if I can prune them back anymore without loosing anything. For your consideration. Just read Tonyas comment and maybe I should do a little homework on these forms. Apologies for chopping. Memories times footprints left behind a steady march. have reviewed my untutored thoughts to you humbled bow my head Craig

Good to see you here and feel honored to be allowed to read this short-full-truth... thanks for posting Richard

Good little haiku you've written. I'd say you've mastered this style well. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Just because you have one, doesn't mean you need to be one..." Doin' a March of Dimes walk 4/26 : http://www.marchforbabies.org/jnj7880

Leonard, this evokes a fond memory, a footprint in my mind, and time does march on. Thanks for sharing ~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous