Prayer for a friend

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— Seren, Apr 11, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

Bosscombat

17 years 1 month ago

hey hun

I didn't know you were religious hehe I think its a nice poem! my only quarrel with this poem hun is that the rhymes seem a little obvious or something...but you know im no critic...and I know your mind is elsewhere... but I still give it 4/5 stars :) <3

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

thanks

matty yeah my mind was else where but now hes been found im ok ... still dont know if a want to hit him or hug him though LOL ... the joy of being a mum ... love you bro and yeah i dont like this one lol Love and Light JayC x x x x x

Shonna James

17 years 1 month ago

Gawd. Who?

BUT! Would like to think I'm Gonna see them all again. As as always JC a pleasure to read. xxsejXX

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

My SON !!

went on a hunting trip up here on the north coast of nsw and well he went missing they had to send pol-air up to find them lmao suffice to say they are ok ! if a little tired and hungry , though i dont think my heart could take another night like i had last night lol ..glad you enjoyed it hun hope your having a lovely easter break Love and light JayC

Shonna James

17 years 1 month ago

I'm glad they are safe.

You hun, deserve a big hug! (()_)). I felt this as someone who had lost and not found again. I was brought up catholic but not sure about he whole praying thing, I truly believe it works for those who truly, deserve it. I am so glad your prayers were answered. Have a good nights sleep. xxx

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks hun … I love my Big

Thanks hun ... I love my Big fella as i call him hes 18 with a heart of gold and i dont know what I'd do without him ... I got my easter wish it was for Jake to come home .. Thanks again dream sweet hun Love and Light JayC

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

You think right LOL ..ive

You think right LOL ..ive read that a couple of times and didnt pick that up thanks Sincerely JayC