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Hawaii On A Lark

We sat one day in a Mexican Bar.    
It was on the patio—tequila
flowed freely—and dreams grew wings like a lark.

The breezes were warm and inviting
in Seattle that time; and it was beaches

that we longed to see.  T’would be Hawaii.

Let’s fly to the western shore, I said, then.
Liquor talking, he said, to be sure—when?
We’ll go right away, soon as we can pack;
and before he knew it, we got on track.

A 747 would fit the plan—

Big-bellied bird, wide with possibility.
Given nine or ten hours and we would land
for cocktail hour on the sand of Waikiki.

We stepped off the plane into a warm bath
of orchid air; wind blew soft through our hair.
Turquoise surf pounded the Pacific shore 
as totems shared stories of mermaid lore.

Magnolias around our necks were hung
with beads that were strung
from minature shells.

Drum beats permeated balmy night air,
and shadow dancers with feathered hair twirled
round and round, lighting the tiki torches
one by one.  A hollow conch horn played.

Six months later, from our dream we woke;
our lark had flown away, back to Seattle.

We would not forget the Hawaiian folk.

Aloha.

— deelilah, Apr 11, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Stella

17 years 1 month ago

The hot air, the waves of

The hot air, the waves of the Pacific, I can feel it. I've never been to Hawaii but this takes me there nicely Dee! I love making plans like that, impulsive, on the spot ' dreams grew wings like a lark..' I wish they always did. I think you have a strong sense of adventure about you, maybe because you've seen so many places, I really love that. p.s. That's a gorgeous girl in your profile pic! ~Stella
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you, Stella

Thanks for the nice note, Stella. Sorry it took so long to get back, been so busy. Hawaii was a great experience; so was Alaska. You must try to visit Hawaii. The sound of those conch horns under the light of the tiki's is haunting. Yes, I must go back. For now, I take it (the adventure) where I can get it. Always, Dee
Rett

Rett

17 years 1 month ago

Beautiful Deelilah

I bet it was absolutely wonderful. Beautifully written! Sorry it took so long to get to read it. Respectfully, Rett: Hug a logger, you'll never go back to trees! For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you, Rett

It was indeed wonderful. And it happened pretty much like that for real, starting with the tequila and ending with a solid sense of who the Hawaiian people are. I always love to hear from you. Deelilah