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GOOD FRIDAY

Lonely and abandoned
He suffered in an awful silence

For this He had been born as man
This and nothing more

And yet for so much more
Willing but with trepidation

That surely gripped His heart
He knew the cruelty of sin demanded

That the price be paid
There was no other way

For thirty pieces of silver
And a single trecherous kiss

The deed had been signed
As long ago foretold

His precious blood would be shed

Lord have mercy, look upon your son
Your obedient and perfect sacrificial lamb

Who lovingly hangs impailed
Upon the wood of the Dogwood tree

And offers up his very soul
That we may someday step

Into Eternity and forever
To be with Thee

— Linda Moses, Apr 10, 2009

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Linda

Be with thee what about something like To be with Thee or Then be with Thee Otherwise very sorrowful but heartfelt poem "Come to live and be rewarded"
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 1 month ago

Chrys

I did use your suggestion, and I like it "to be with thee". Thanks for your help. Have a nice weekend Sincerely, Linda
Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

Linda, wonderful poem

Of the meaning behind Good Friday and Easter Sunday, done as only you can. May God bless you my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 1 month ago

Rett

Thank you for your gracious comments. I am always pleased to hear from you Sincerely, Linda
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

Linda

Like Rett, I too was very happy to see someone write of Easter other than bunnies and chocolates. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"You can be a dreamer, you can be your dreams come true. Just let imagination lead, reality will follow through." - Michael Hedges
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 1 month ago

Hey, Jess

Thank you for reading my poem, hope you and yours are well. Sincerely, Linda
MI

Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 1 month ago

Linda

What a remarkable poem! I was simply inthralled to go through it. Your imagery and choice of words is awesome. -Mohammad A Quatrain from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi - A Drop and the Ocean: Obscured behind my verses are my cries When I laugh my sobing dies In the uneasy tomb of tunes, my friends I am engaged in burying my sighs
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 1 month ago

Mohammad

Thank you so much for your gracious comments, always a pleasure to hear from you. I like the Quatrain you wrote. It is so true. Sincerely, Linda