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Apr 10, 2009
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Your going to notice me tonight,
High heels and a short dress,
Oh baby, you'll see me,
Screw the rules,
Ima make the boys drool,
other girls will know I rule,
learn who's boss and who runs this school,
teachers cant help it they just have to stare,
the dance floor has only easy competition,
bodies move to the beat,
some sweat at the heat,
Oh baby,in you walk,
I do belive I felt my heart pop,
I wink at you,You smile,
I walk what feels like mile,
and return your smile,
Hop into your arms,
return to the floor,
party some more,
The dance is ending,
Oh god, its time to go,
My very first kiss was such a bliss,
that night under the moon,
my ride pulled up and I ran to the truck,
Oh baby,what a night that one was.
— ANC1996, Apr 10, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 1 month ago
Please don't take this the wrong way
phoenixflame
17 years 1 month ago
Lol nice!