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The Melancholy Willow
Mellow willow wave my pillow
not with dew my melancholy spills all out to you
the winding way beneath
your tresses like a wreath
caressing now the sheath of my dismay
Willow waving sad good byes
willow telling never lies
willow in my pillow weeping dreams
nothing's what it seems
is it, was it, what I feel
knowing, flowing as we kneel
over waters deep
thinking in your sleep
Willow, love, your grace profound
with autumn leaves you sweep
by the mill the willow I adore
even when I see you never more
your're the clothes that I adorn
swaddled as I was when I was born
Oh Longobaldolino, love, the memory of your tears
while weeping willow fears
your supple body bears
and makes you dig so deep
e’en though it be in sleep
to find your waning heart that beats
beneath the great charade of life
and its parade of strife
now willing to decease the hardships of disease
and finally obtain release
I love you Longo come to me
where I will soothe your brow
in any way I can, to waft away your pain
and give relief in what we now call grief.
And all this came of weeping
with the willow of your youth
so lonely standing on the hill, so long ago for sooth
it heralded your sad demise and with its tears
did fill your eyes
already for to grieve the lies of life’s hard trials
and family ties
and in the very place
you alone gain to mourn in words
your heart in tatters furled
The pitter-patter of small birds
sound their laughter
to hereafter
while the blackbirds sing entranced
who pluck the strings along the pale thin branch,
melancholy the notes
your dead leaves making mounds beneath.
The weeping willow breathes below the heath
where mists still share our grief
wending round the bending grasses
breezes, as I sit
leaning on the willow trunk
so wide and deeply lit
Your boldness is sublime
and stirs this heart of mine
while moved in sympathetic zeal
your tears are mixed
entwine with dew,
they pour from crown right down
to stones and pebbles brown
where minnows swim
I drown
in sorrow's deep abyss
a willow bliss, will it all come to this
oh willow I adore what you are
there no more
Oh melancholy man we raise a smile
we can
and raise our glasses o’er the grasses bland
and toast your wisdom
stroke you with our hand
and wish you well
wherever is your land
Critiques
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Her I am
Ink Dragon
17 years 2 months ago
Dear Ann,
Proprietress o…
17 years 1 month ago
my Ann of Norway,
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Not too soon
Ink Dragon
17 years 1 month ago
Ann,
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
how I adore YOU & your willow weaving words
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
Willow one and Willow too
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
This is beautiful Ann when
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
Hope its better