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The Melancholy Willow

 

 

Mellow willow wave my pillow

not with dew my melancholy spills all out to you

the winding way beneath
your tresses like a wreath

caressing now the sheath of my dismay

 

Willow waving sad good byes 
willow telling never lies

willow in my pillow weeping dreams
nothing's what it seems

is it, was it, what I feel

knowing, flowing as we kneel

over waters deep
thinking in your sleep

 

Willow, love, your grace profound 

with autumn leaves you sweep

by the mill the willow I adore

even when I see you never more

your're the clothes that I adorn

swaddled as I was when I was born

 

Oh Longobaldolino, love, the memory of your tears

while weeping willow fears 
your supple body bears

and makes you dig so deep 
e’en though it be in sleep

to find your waning heart that beats

beneath the great charade of life
and its parade of strife

now willing to decease the hardships of disease

and finally obtain release

 

I love you Longo come to me
where I will soothe your brow

in any way I can, to waft away your pain

and give relief in what we now call grief.

 

And all this came of weeping
with the willow of your youth

so lonely standing on the hill, so long ago for sooth

it heralded your sad demise and with its tears 

did fill your eyes

already for to grieve the lies of life’s hard trials

and family ties
and in the very place 

you alone gain to mourn in words

your heart in tatters furled

 

The pitter-patter of small birds
sound their laughter 

to hereafter

while the blackbirds sing entranced 

who pluck the strings along the pale thin branch, 

melancholy the notes

your dead leaves making mounds beneath.

 

The weeping willow breathes below the heath

where mists still share our grief

wending round the bending grasses 

breezes, as I sit

leaning on the willow trunk 

so wide and deeply lit

 

Your boldness is sublime
and stirs this heart of mine 

while moved in sympathetic zeal 
your tears are mixed
entwine with dew,

they pour from crown right down

to stones and pebbles brown
where minnows swim

I drown 
in sorrow's deep abyss

a willow bliss, will it all come to this

oh willow I adore what you are 
there no more

 

Oh melancholy man we raise a smile
we can

and raise our glasses o’er the grasses bland

and toast your wisdom
stroke you with our hand 

and wish you well 
wherever is your land 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


— Nordic cloud, Apr 10, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Her I am

Now I've been and gone and done it too!!! I thought we might work on this theme and make a poem worthy to dedicate to Longo as he has honoured us with his wonderful poetry so many times, we could thank him for being here with us all. Or you can correct my too-long screed of words and make it more succinct. I wrote it in no-light in the dead of night and had to decipher its words and their spidery patterns on the pale green page that I wrote them on; one whole page disappeared as the pen ran out, I wonder what it said! I don't remember what I thought in the night again in the morning. I don't know what you think? Love to you all Ann of Norway-Anna-Annuccia.
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 2 months ago

Dear Ann,

this is such a sweet tribute, but I daresay you´re right in thinking it a bit long. Maybe rearraging the lines would do the trick? Let´s see: Mellow willow, wave my pillow not with dew my melancholy spills all out to you the winding way beneath your tresses like a wreath caressing now the sheath of my dismay willow waving sad good byes, willow telling never lies willow in my pillow weeping dreams, nothings’ what it seems is it, was it what we feel knowing, flowing as we kneel over waters deep, thinking in our sleep Or something like that, I think. Your words are beautiful, I wouldn´t change them if I were you. Yours, ~Nina “Like plumbers and dentists, poets are fallible, and the possibility of genuine nonsense cannot be ruled out.” (Mark Haddon)
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 1 month ago

my Ann of Norway,

I, too, find it a bit to long, though it is beautiful, my dear Ann! Nina's s suggestion is great. two things I would do differently for the sake of the flow. (just my personal opinion): nothings’ what it seems - nothing is quite what it seems over waters deep, thinking in our sleep - over waters, ever deep, thinking in our silent sleep I would also try to bind in: willow, love, your grace is deep in the Autumn leaves you sweep because these lines, this rhyme, really stuck in my head. I will come back to this soon and am looking forward to what you make of it. :-) your Proprietress
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

Not too soon

I shall do something, as I said to Nina I had written it to be one long hanging branch of the willow tree, 'wafting in the breeze' and wanted it therefore to be in the centre but Neopoets technicians thought otherwise, as they keep on putting mine on the left, just as they please. Apart from that, you are both faithful friends and I do love you to point things out for me, I shall do my best to please both myself and you anon. It needed doing something with anyway, but I felt it should come near the time the Willow of Lombardy was mentioned and posted it earlier than I should!! I am glad to have you back my Proprietress with your tresses swaying with the willows magic causing words to spill onto the page. I should love to come to Germany some time and meet you in person both of you. My love to you from Ann of Norway
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 1 month ago

Ann,

you would be so welcome! And I would love to come to your place up North and see your famous view "live". But be warned: I usually have two lively kids and a hyperactive dog in tow! Yours, ~Nina “Like plumbers and dentists, poets are fallible, and the possibility of genuine nonsense cannot be ruled out.” (Mark Haddon)
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 1 month ago

how I adore YOU & your willow weaving words

Dearest Annuccia... How I love willows, & this very long rambling work, which I haven't time to really delve into.. it will need revision I think a few times at least... I must go look at Longo's work, been meaning to for ages, since your mention... You lovely kind thing, how I adore YOU & your willow weaving words. Much love Annibella xxx Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

Willow one and Willow too

Whilst musing in the sunshines glory birdsong stories makes strung like beads they nestle on wire ready are they skies of fliers Loved your poems my Ann Its been long since I read the classical intstruction of yore yet read I did the works of MILTON and JOSEPH CONRAD when time was softer and our minds were wont to studiosly craft memories of sturdier want then the Slab dashery of pressboard heaven Longo I have missed now knowing he is ill He loves my poems and I his The wolves are so popular and much vivid even in passing in conversation with a trapper freind of my fathers from my childhood days This is a fine poem and one needs time with a willow to get to know its sacredness as we should each reverance our lives and togetherness here I remember Purplemoondoll her lovely comments her poems Too late she had come and gone in our Neopoet family and I had missed the time to comment much to her in return I could have more I shall go and see and leave a note to Mr Longo thank you kindred spirit this morning has been blessed
Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

This is beautiful Ann when

This is beautiful Ann when you get it revised i cant wait to read the end product cause i love it ... Love and light JayC x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

Hope its better

And it WAS miiddle-placed, or whatever they call that here, centred when I edited it and it has run out to the side without my permission, help technicians PLEASE. Well it probably needs even more titivating but here it is for the moment. Yours Ann of Norway