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Speech Impediment

Text, text, blog, blog, email,
Let's give it's due to the cyber world,
Hail, Hail!!

Wait, Stop! where is the joy of speech?
Where is the one on one or group
conversations?

That face to face repartee, the beauty of
facial expressions, that lets you know
what their brain is concocting,

The short cuts of a beautiful language to
save time on the written. LOL, IDK,
AFK, and so on. What are the
repercussions?

Are we slowly lossing the ablilty to have
conversation?
Are we becoming shy and tongue tied,
from hiding behind our text and email?

What of our facial expressions, will they
be loss to a stone face robotic looking
human?

Will our tongue shrivel up and blow
away as dust does, will our gums evict
our teeth because of lack of caress from
our loss tongues?

And what of our hands, Will they
become thin and long with out nails,
each finger tip like a stylus, no feeling
just memory on where to go, what key to
depress?

I am from a world of the hand written
language, of face to face conversation,
no cell phones, no text, and no email.

For me, it is sad to say goodbye to
these things that were part of the fabric
of my life.

So hooray to progress, and the thief of
life!
For me, I think not.
— Eduardo Cruz, Apr 10, 2009

About This Poem

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Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Eddie

Eddie this was great, How many of us have felt this way. Who took the human out of Human? still and all it is up to the individual not to keep the one on one and reality where it belongs. Progress is good but only to a point. I couldn't help but think of trying to speak to a real person on the phone when calling a business for whatever reason. Where are the REAL people anymore. Progress has turned our society into a bunch of automatons Excellent write Chrys "Go live and be rewarded"
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 2 months ago

Hey Chrys!

It's so nice to be back in the world, and hear from you! Thank you so much, that is the point exactly, I don't believe that some of the younger people will appreciate this. I don't want to be an automaton, I want to feel, discuss, debate, and see the reaction on their face!! Hey, how's that married woman daughter of yours Jess!! thanks Chrys!! Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

Jess is doin' good!

School 5 days a week, and homework out the ying-yang, but doing good. I just have to say that this is an awesome write. I actually just praised someone for using really 'dead' words in their poetry. Words that I haven't heard in years, and really need to make a comeback. People are so ready with their textspeak, and they've forgotten real vocabulary! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"You can be a dreamer, you can be your dreams come true. Just let imagination lead, reality will follow through." - Michael Hedges
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 1 month ago

Hey Veggie!!

I think that if it's homework up the ying-yang, it's only on the dark side. I don't think we get any light in there? LOL Nice to here from friends, it's wonderful to be back in the world! Thank you so much Veggie.You look so happy in your picture, marriage agrees with you. Thanks for the awesome!! Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads ti many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Eddie...

Good to see you here and with this poem that sent me reeling into thoughts and images of fingers no longer needing the touch between beings because all has been replaced with a keyboard... oooohhhh... what a Star Trek episode would that be... enjoyed the read, hope all is well with you... Richard
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 2 months ago

hey Richard,

Star Trek, that's the feeling!! but this is beyond the touch, the face as expressionless as a wall! Happy you enjoyed! It's great to be back in the world, and talk to friends! Thanks, Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 1 month ago

My sweet Kelsey,

Thanks so very much for the awesome! (AFK) Away From Key Board. Hey I'm so happy you stop by and said hello!! I love you all!! Thanks, Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 1 month ago

Kelsey

thanks a lot that five star was very generous of you!! I like this rating system a lot better!!! Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 1 month ago

An enjoyable....

...write, AND it left me areas to ponder. This one is much better than your "blues poem". I found it thought provoking, and very easy to read. Maybe, just maybe...your forte' could be "freeform", nes pa? write on, dear sir. #{:>{)]2+++ docmaverick.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 1 month ago

Doc my boy!!

I have many poems on this site, and this one was just an observation,truly it was prose! I'm happy you enjoyed it!! Fast Eddie Esq. Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 1 month ago

sweet Janice

It's not the computers, it's us, forgetting that there is life out there! We are becoming a chained society, to what ever is quick and easy. We live out of a box today, that's the thing that makes me sad. It is a great pleasure to hear from you my dear friend! I'll soon be catching up to your poems that i have miss. thank you so much for stopping by, and I am glad that you enjoyed my observation. thanks, Eddie Life is like a railroad track that leads to many junctures, if you stand on the track Love comes speeding along and runs you over!! Splat!!!!