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Good Friday

The daylight’s first-born, fleeting cry,wing feathers beating night-choked sky,pierced with its urgent songto rouse a drunken thief,who’s stolen time to find relieffrom prayers striking this morning’s gong.  Those caring tongues, both loose and free,that once mouthed endless time for me,pay lips to other clocks;their chimes pretending mindwill make the time safe hearts can’t findin busied lives snapped tight with locks. There is no prophet for this dayto curb the pain, or make life stay,just sense of death that bringsit’s knowing, sure, unkind,without history to rewindpast tapes this dying always sings. No resurrection now can come;no Sunday’s hope; no stone undone;no ageing, caring end;no fierce, apocryphal cryto speak one final truth’s goodbyeand turn each silent absent friend. But I have seen them all through eyesfar brighter than this morning’s skies;heard their words, drunk their breathand known their selfish dreams beforeanother foot had walked their shore.Our times of love still beggar death.  
  
— professor, Apr 10, 2009

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Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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yenti

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

Prof

Glad to hear that you are feeling well with the world, and as you say there are a few that will feel this way today, and maybe as a habit of past teachings. (not worn) The history of how to keep millions of people in check, from not teaching them to read and putting the fear of God in them, to making them virtual Zombies of religion, to present days of televisions mindless souls where religion is less of a habit, and then we try to ask the stupid question, where did we go wrong when there is mindless violence on the streets and drugs etc: there to make the already disturbed mind go into free fall. How can we find a way of teaching our people a way of life that is free from all these things ???? Is it to late and we should have started with Moses and used those tablets as a guide and not an instrument of torture. I do go on.... You started it though,a great write and so it should be lol Try not to solve all the problems at once, one at a time will do, Yours Ian.T
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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Keith

Good to see you again. You haven't missed a step or a beat though. Another one of your fine examples of writing Chrys Go live and be rewarded
Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Another

Lovely write Keith ... loved it .. The stars fell down and formed a crown of five Love and light JayC
professor

professor

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks JayC

Glad you enjoyed it and ty for the five star crown lol. Keith x
Seren

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Keith

it was well deserved .. this one has a feel that i havnt felt in your poems before (if you get my meaning)lol ... good to see your with us again Love and light JayC x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago

ominous

and dark... my cup of strong drink! Loved it! Cat
professor

professor

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Cat

Long time since you've been around so good to see you back. Yes this poem would definitely be up your street lol. Keith
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

so how are YOU feeling

mysterious proff man I ponder your poems are here as I too wander not trained yet I see and feel the temp pulse like Roberta Bondar (canuk scientist) just listening to rock stars silver In a gadda da vida Beggar Reminds me of the much Harsher story made into moview about Japanese occupation of China Aircraft etc Empire of the sun!! great comments great poem You were there long ago on comments to I Love your mind Proffessor
professor

professor

17 years 1 month ago

I am flattered

that i conjure an air of mystery for you Orgami and that you obviously feel the layers beneath the surface words of my poems. How i really feel changes from day to day but that is the way i am and it is not for me a life of flat and controlled emotion. I love your mind and raw, natural forms of poetic expression which seem to flow straight from observation, thought and feeling into a maelstrom of imagery woven into a tapestry whose fabric is bound by deep emotional undercurrents. Long ago indeed my friend, it seems as though forever. Keith