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Dying Race
Slipping down the passage of time
I spied an ancient porcupine
He said his spines had grown too old
And soft to use as swords so bold
His wrinkled brow, his strange long tail (I know he aint got one!)
Were only vestiges of what they were
His pride and joy, his well formed toes
Were all that's left he said, who knows
What will become of me in time
When I have left this era, mine
And wandered out among the stars
To make strange puzzles next to Mars
Oh there, you see, just to the right
Is porcupine constellation bright
He fought so boldly with all his might
And now is famous in his plight
Oh porcupine, oh porcupine
Why did they have to go
The world is such a chaste old place
Without the likes of you, you know
Come back and change the wings of chance
And do again your magic dance
Your swords across your back and thighs
We'll drink to you, for you were wise
Critiques
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Ann, extinction is a sad
yenti
17 years 2 months ago
Ann of Norway
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh how lovely
orgami
17 years 2 months ago
porcupine oh porcupine
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Takk Orgami.